âForget words like âhard sellâ and âsoft sell.â That will only confuse you. Just be sure your advertising is saying something with substance, something that will inform and serve the consumer, and be sure youâre saying it like itâs never been said before.â
This is a well-documented and famous quote by William Bernbach, the eminent advertising guru who was the catalyst behind the American Creative Revolution of the 60s and 70s, and more specifically, was credited for being the very first to merge the in-house skills of the copywriter and creative director â a team that is effective and congruous as ever today.
There are two reasons why I can relate to Bernbachâs quote. Firstly, I was in sales, marketing and advertising for over 10 years before finally calling myself a fully fledged copywriter, and the terms âhard sellâ and âsoft sellâ were used with such ferocious regularity in my previous roles, that it was enough to make a young man feel inadequate and under pressure to perform.
And secondly, when I write web copy, irrespective of the client, industry, product and service, I always want to inject it with a healthy dose of insight and originality. In order to achieve âyouâre saying it like itâs never been said beforeâ there are still many factors you need to consider to produce high quality, engaging sales copy.
Here are my top 10 tips for successful online copy:
1. Grab attention with a great headline.
2. Write from your customer’s point of view.
3. Write about benefits, not features.
4. Read your copy out loud.
5. Get a colleague or customer to review your copy.
6. Write as if you’re speaking to one person.
7. Be specific.
8. Be simple.
9. Include an offer (or link) “above the fold.”
10. Include testimonials.
Although this is already an overwhelming list of goals, another useful thing to do, or ask yourself rather, is: âWould I âbuyâ because of this copy?â Your target audience will decide just as quickly and ruthlessly as you, so in the modern era of online customer satisfaction, Iâm afraid to say that the customer is always right. Stick robustly to the above check list and your web copy will be more than right.
Unfortunately Bernbach died in the early 80âs, but his passion and knowledge are immortally engrained in the minds of many copywriters, and I for one will always pass it on.
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I like your sentiments, but wondering why a ‘fully fledged copywriter’ would need to put an apostrophe in 60’s and 70’s and why numbers 1 and 2 of your list don’t have full stops after their copy while the rest of the list do. Pedantic maybe, but I think you should be paying more attention to point 5.
Graham
18/5/2009, 19:59
Hi Graham,
As blog administrator, and therefore responsible for subbing all entries, I’ll put my hands up to not spotting those slight errors. Thanks for being so eagle eyed.
Ben
Ben Potter
19/5/2009, 16:39
As an artist I was inspired by the work of the ‘beat movement” as you were inspired by the words of William Bernbach. I looked towards the creative elements of the ‘beat, group and in my younger days led a similar way of life. A character in that group that blew me away was William S Burroughs, you might have heard of him and one of his famous quotes is âIn the magical universe there are no coincidences and there are no accidents. Nothing happens unless someone wills it to happen.â Good will Dape.
Dape
27/5/2009, 09:08